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31 December 2008 @ 02:07 pm

Here's the song for the newly posted chapter via yousendit.com...

Death by White Lies

and the chapter...

I just got a new review from someone named 'blacktounge14'. I'm assuming her (his?) name is supposed to be 'blacktongue14', so that first incarnation isn't a typo on my behalf. Anyways, typo aside, her review had me laughing my ass off. I recommend a skimming - http://www.fanfiction.net/r/828256/

Hope you have a happy new year! Drop in and let me know how you are if you have the chance! :)

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sidewalksgsidewalksg on December 31st, 2008 09:34 pm (UTC)
Oh, I'm so glad you like the chapter! There's alot of editing to do still but I thought I need to put it out there if I'm ever going to get over my writer's block. Hopefully I can fix this chapter, then get the next chapter out within the next couple of days. The next chapter is already half-written.

I hope I can get my shit together soon. :S

Also -- YEAH! Until you pointed it out I hadn't even noticed that he/she was only on chapter 9. Honestly, if she/he's frustrated now, imagine what's going to happen when the reviewer gets to chapter 101 without seeing the words 'climax', 'cock', or 'golden lotus' even once. I fear for my prudish, virginal life!

Quick! Send cookies!

P.S. How's your kiddie liking his first job? IS he still liking it, or has the magic worn off? ;)
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Crunchy, crunchy toast: anime - bebop - i thought i knew spikecinnamontoast on December 31st, 2008 10:19 pm (UTC)
blacktounge14 = WTF? I could barely skim that review.

Thank you for the pleasant Spike/Faye buzz on New Year's Eve. :)

*sighs happily*

I'll think about the latter part of the chapter later.
Fascinated: angel devil problem -- mob_boss_tesskittengrin on January 27th, 2009 03:02 am (UTC)
Ack. Totally got distracted and forgot to leave my commentary!

Spike and Julia consummating their would-be relationship was like someone fucking with the colour saturation of the strung-together images of his life

I LOVE that image. It's gorgeous.

And you're so good at leaving us all hanging at the end of your chapters : ) It's great. I love wanting more all the time!